Obviously created for a reason and I think it is self-aware in its simplicity but I'd like to hear some representation of the actions taking place maybe, I had trouble connecting to it personally.

Very smooth and well written, the only thing that could possibly improve would be the audio levels during the end, with the mouse(?) the other characters are much louder and clearer, just levels that's all...other than that it is wonderful. Many different things you could do with these characters, well worth taking past pilot I think, curious where you would take it.